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how it feels to drown.

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and now here i am,
lying facedown on the shore,
tossing and turning,
          trailing on the breeze,
          plunging down like silver whales,
          and you - you are breath.

so i throw my words
into the deepest of seas
but the salt water,
          it cannot heal me
          in the lovely way you do.
          (and i can't let go.)
four haikus, just for you.
sorry, i know this sucks.
i tried too hard.
but whateverrrr.

(c)


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Daily Lit Deviation 5.28.10 :heart:
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TinyBat's avatar
"and you - you are breath." <- my favorite line right there. I enjoyed this, haiku are a favorite of mine.