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with thunder cries
and lightning eyes,
she crawls inside,
    needing,
          breathing,
    seething,
          feeding,
darkening my mind
as we entwine,

and every time,
i'm open wide.
a monster.
maybe a strange breed of vampire, even.
(one that doesn't sparkle.)
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appa-appa-away Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
As long as it doesn't sparkle...

I love how simple this is, whilst still being very effective. Great job.
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theresambraun Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Student Writer
Hehe.

Thank you! :)
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poeticflow24 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I love this! This is amazing.
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:icontheresambraun:
theresambraun Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you! :blushes:
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scarsandtetris Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2011
Wonderful! If I could fave it more than once without unfaving it, I would!!
AND YES NO SPARKLING VAMPIRES
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Pengasius Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Simply amazing! Faving this all the way
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Musical-Ink Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
amazing :heart:
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doodler89 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011
Beautifully written.:blackrose:
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Starry-Owl Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2011   Writer
LOVE this :)
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